Talk:Ryan Johnson (footballer, born 1996)/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 17:52, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Can we avoid single-sentence paras.
• "youth academy" any link?
• Link for "loan"?
• "joining Stevenage" which league?
• "spells at Boreham Wood, as" these were non-League right?
• "the Football League " link, but the lead said youngest player ever which presumably could include non-League time?
• "being sent-off for" link.
• "bookable offence" link.
• Link loan again if possible.
• Link substitute.
• "the National League South club" overlinked.
• "heading in a corner" link both.
• "international duty in" you haven't yet mentioned for whom.
• "manager" link.
• " the COVID-19 pandemic in March" link the UK specific Covid pandemic article.
• "friendly match" link.
• "on penalties" link penalty shoot-out.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:40, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article @The Rambling Man: great spot with the youngest ever player / youngest player in the Football League difference. I have made all of the suggested changes. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 23:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)