Talk:Ryan Williams (women's soccer)/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Nova Crystallis in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 00:32, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Overall: Pass
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editCollege career
editIn 2014, Williams' freshman year, she was converted to play as a defender,[3] played in 19 matches and started in 18.
, played twice too close together
She recorded her first collegiate shot and shot on goal
, what's the difference? Is the first shot important?
- Removed, the debut was more important. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:56, 8 June 2020 (UTC)
Club career
editand Williams was released as a result, and she was allowed to continue training with the Courage
, is there another word besides and that can be used?
- Can you put ref 55 at the end of the
On July 26, Williams participated in the 2018 Women's International Champions Cup, substituting on in the 61st minute against Paris Saint-Germain.
- Could you expand a bit on
Williams made her first start in the finals, leading to a 1–0 victory
. I feel "Williams" is repeated too soon and an expansion would help.
@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)