Talk:São Tomé and Príncipe at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Short, sweet, and not much to comment on...
  • "São Tomé and Príncipe first competed at the Olympic Games at the" Two "at the"s in rapid succession.
  • "The country participated on six" -> "The country participated in the Olympics on six"
  • "São Tomé and Príncipe participated in the Rio Paralympic Games from 7 to 18 September 2016.[5]" This is kinda choppy to be here, basically it is the first sentence of the article again.
  • Did they have a flagbearer for the closing ceremony?

Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 20:29, 15 April 2018 (UTC)Reply