Talk:S/O Satyamurthy/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 04:04, 16 July 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article first thing tomorrow. Thank you. Looks good at first glance. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 04:04, 16 July 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Lead

• "The film revolves around three characters; one follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn. " — "The film revolves around three characters; the first follows his heart, the second uses his brain and the third uses his brawn."

 Done Rephrased. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:31, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

Plot

• Wikilink Ooty and Reddiarpatti.
• "apologizes" — "apologises".

Two changes done. Reddiarpatti does not have an article. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:43, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

Production

• "rumored" — "rumoured".

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:43, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

• "Filming began at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Shift it to filming section and change "Filming began on 22 September at a Hyderabad mall." to "Principal photography began on 22 September at a Hyderabad-based shopping mall."

Actually, its the production works that have begun on 10 April 2014. Made the second change. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:48, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: What exactly does "production works" mean? Is it Pre-production works? — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 08:56, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

No. I meant the official launch ceremony. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 08:58, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: If that's the case, then rephrase it as "The film was officially launched at Ramanaidu Studios in Hyderabad on 10 April 2014." — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 09:01, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:05, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

• "Ileana D'Cruz, the female lead in Srinivas' films Jalsa (2008) and Julai, reportedly agreed to perform an item number in the film (her comeback in Telugu cinema) for a high fee." — If D'Cruz was in the film, then why isn't she mentioned in the "Cast" section? — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 09:02, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

Looks like Miniapolis removed the content "Her inclusion however remained unconfirmed" during the c/e. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:05, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: Thought as much. I have removed the info on her anyways. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 09:07, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

I should have done this earlier. Anyways, Thank you. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:08, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: You are welcome. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 09:10, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

• "he asked Srinivas for the name." — "he requested Srinivas to use the name for the titular character's son."
• "Arjun trained hard for the fight sequences, and hired a well-known gymnast to learn flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills for his stunts." — Who's the gymnast? If there's no info on him, then rephrase the sentence as simply "Arjun learned flips, somersaults and other gymnastic skills to perform his stunts."
• Wikilink Dubai.

All done. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:13, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

• Any news on Brahmi's inclusion?

No. He can be seen in the film, in its plot and in its reviews. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:21, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

@Pavanjandhyala: That's alright. Just a general question. Not necessary though. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 09:24, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

• Wikilink Peter Hein.

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:36, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.

   Pass or Fail:

@Pavanjandhyala: Don't see any issues with the article. It passes the GA criteria. Congratulations, Pavan! — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 06:24, 18 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing this article, Ssven2! This happens to be my fifteenth consecutive GA success! Pavanjandhyala (talk) 06:27, 18 July 2015 (UTC)