Talk:SMS (Bangerz)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 00:33, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

• Dance-pop is in the info box, but not mentioned anywhere else or sourced.
  •  Fixed 和DITOREtails 12:29, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
• Live performances and charting should be mentioned in the lead, it's supposed to be a summary of all sections.
  •  Done 和DITOREtails 12:29, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
• If it is a pop song with elements of hip-hop, then it's not a hip-hop song, and should thus be removed from the info box.
  •  Fixed 和DITOREtails 12:29, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
• it's bad language. → explicit language, perhaps?
• Could split the personnel list into two columns so it's not so long
  • Personally, I don't think the list is too long, but done anyway.
• The charts box should have the shading markup on the Chart (2013) column
  •  Done
• UK Singles Chart should be linked too
  •  Done
• Ref 6 should have Billboard and PGM linked
•  Done
• Ref 7 shouldn't have capitals in title
•  Fixed
• Ref 8 is missing a publisher, and MTV news unlinking as it's the second mention.
•  Done
• Ref 9 both need linking
•  Done
• Ref 14 CNN needs linking
•  Done

Short article so not much to comment on. On hold.  — ₳aron 11

32, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

Passing  — ₳aron 16

19, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

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