Talk:SMS Alexandrine/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

In light of full complaince, I will instant pass and make some prose suggestions. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:21, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links N, "Central Pacific" is DAB link.
• No Dead links Y
• Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

• "Intended for service in the German colonial empire, the ship was designed with a combination of steam and sail power for extended range, and was equipped with a battery of ten 15-centimeter (5.9 in) guns." Would "Intended to serve with" work better as an into?
• That's my only suggestion; good job! -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC)