Talk:SMS Falke (1865)/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:32, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:
- suggest turning abbrev=off for the displacement
- Done
- the crew numbers don't match between the body and infobox
- Must've been a typo
- link paddle steamer
- Done
- I assume the main battery were single mounts? Gunshields or open mounts?
- Details are sketchy - I'd assume single mounts without shields, but I can't say for certain - that's the joy of going back this far with smaller warships
- comma after Folkestone, Britain
- Done
- recommisioned→recommissioned
- Good catch
- File:Norddeutsches Panzerschiff SMS ARMINIUS im Gefecht mit französischen Panzerschiffen vor der Wesermündung 24. August 1870 Illustrirte Zeitung vom Februar 1871.jpg doesn't have an author identified, so PD-old-70-1923 doesn't work.
- Fixed
- Ditto for File:Die Gartenlaube (1881) b 752.jpg with PD-old
- Might have to move this to en.wiki - there's a signature on the image, but I can't make it out, so PD-EU-no-author-disclosure doesn't work. The annoying thing is, anybody working in the early 1880s was almost certainly dead by 1949, so whoever it is, it's almost certainly out of copyright in Germany.
- Nevermind, the caption has the author - F. Hünten, apparently Franz, 1822-1887.
- Might have to move this to en.wiki - there's a signature on the image, but I can't make it out, so PD-EU-no-author-disclosure doesn't work. The annoying thing is, anybody working in the early 1880s was almost certainly dead by 1949, so whoever it is, it's almost certainly out of copyright in Germany.
That's all I could find, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:59, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
- This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:45, 13 September 2019 (UTC)