Talk:SMS Friedrich Carl/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   prose: (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. Fitting-out work followed and was completed by 12 December 1903. Suggest - Fitting-out work followed and this was completed by 12 December 1903

• Changed as per your suggestion. Parsecboy (talk) 22:00, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

2. which developed a total of 17,272 indicated horsepower. Maybe change developed to produced?

• Sounds good. Parsecboy (talk) 22:00, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

3. Friedrich Carl served with the fleet from her commissioning in December 1903. Did you forget to mention which fleet in the opening line? Or is that deliberate as you go on to say which one later.

• I like to be somewhat less specific in the intro - I find it can get bogged down if you try to put too much detail. Parsecboy (talk) 22:00, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

Fair enough.

4. The article still has a stub tag.

• Removed. Parsecboy (talk) 22:00, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 00:42, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

Great work once again, Parsec. Passed Thurgate (talk) 22:21, 6 February 2011 (UTC)