Talk:SMS Heimdall

Latest comment: 11 years ago by QatarStarsLeague in topic GA Review
Good articleSMS Heimdall has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSMS Heimdall is part of the Coastal defense ships of Germany series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 26, 2013Good article nomineeListed
September 13, 2013Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 16:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC) I will review this article, along with the five others. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 16:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

Introduction

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Excellent.

Infobox

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Additionally excellent.

Design

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Very solid section.

Service history

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Any idea why the plan fell through. This is a perfunctory detail, and so it is not necessary. It is merely a matter of curiosity.

Gröner doesn't say, but if I had to guess, it was probably a result of Versailles. The Treaty was signed about a week after this ship was stricken, and contained very strict limitations on the size of the German navy. I'd guess the manpower restrictions would have prevented them from manning another ship of this size. But that's just a hunch. Parsecboy (talk) 10:36, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
Interesting. That decision, if it had been prompted by a high-ranking admiral and of Germany's own volition, would have been an odd one. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 13:55, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

Conclusion

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If you wish to expand upon my suggestion, then when those changes are made, I will pass the article. Even if you will not make the proposed supplement, I will leave the review open for a few days. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:37, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply