Talk:SMS Lika/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 12:10, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
I feel like I should be involved in a GAN for an article with "SMS" in the title, one way or another. Parsecboy (talk) 12:10, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
Not much to nitpick:
- I find the subdivision of the service history confusing - the paragraph before the first subheader is all context to that battle, so it seems odd to split it from the actual battle
- I might trim "Kingdom of" and just refer to it as Italy
- When I remember to do it; I prefer to use the full names of countries that have changed their governmental types so that readers can learn that Putin's Russia isn't that of the Tsars, however much the former would wish it so.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:51, 13 April 2019 (UTC)
- There's an odd mix of "English (German translation)" and "German (English translation)" - I'd standardize one way or the other. Parsecboy (talk) 18:25, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- See if everything's done to your satisfaction. I think that I've caught all the usages of Entente, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:51, 13 April 2019 (UTC)
- Added the most important stuff from Bilzer.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:53, 13 April 2019 (UTC)
- Looks good to me - there's a bit more that can be added on her late 1914/early 1915 activities, but it's not a big deal, and it can always be done before an ACR. Parsecboy (talk) 12:16, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
- Added the most important stuff from Bilzer.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:53, 13 April 2019 (UTC)
- See if everything's done to your satisfaction. I think that I've caught all the usages of Entente, etc.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:51, 13 April 2019 (UTC)