Talk:SMS Olga/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:57, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • old corvette Augusta, Shouldn't there be a comma after corvette? And another after Barbados
    • No on the first, but yes on the second
  • Can you identify the engine type better? She's late enough to have compound-expansion engines.
    • Good point
      • I added it to the infobox for you.
  • Link South America, Samoa, Barbados, Trinidad and Tobago, Venezuela, Brazil, rammed, Spain, battery
    • I think the standard is not to link to articles about modern states. I also don't think linking to naval ram in this case is appropriate, since it would imply that the steamship had a ram. Did link South America and battery though.
  • Do you mean the Orinoco River?
    • Good catch
  • London Paddington station and London Victoria station Awkward. Tell the reader that they were in London visiting.
    • Reworded
  • the former aboard the ironclad Hansa and the former aboard Notus. There should be a latter in her somewhere.
    • Fixed
  • Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:16, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply