Talk:SMS Panther (1885)/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


Well constructed, will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Section 1; All good, consistency maintained, conversion templates and units are fine.
  • Section 2; para 1; "Shew as completed on 31 December 1885", this sentence needs to be fixed. It is meaningless.
  • Section 2; para 3; last sentence; "Britain received Leopard as a war prize in 1920", but why is Leopard mentioned here. Is there something connected to this?
@Parsecboy: Flawlessly constructed apart from some minor issues. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:16, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
Both fixed, good catches on both. Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 14:23, 23 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC)Reply