Talk:SMS Pommerania

Latest comment: 5 years ago by CPA-5 in topic GA Review
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September 17, 2019Good article nomineeListed
January 28, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 16:34, 13 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:34, 13 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • She also received four 3.7 cm (1.5 in) Hotchkiss revolver cannon in 1880 British plural form of the word cannon.
    • I don't know that that's specifically British.
  • Damnit, I forgot that cannon could be American too.
  • She left Kiel in mid-June 1871 for the first research trip Maybe link Kiel.
    • Good catch
  • training squadron. The ships were sent to Salonika Was this the official name of the city? Because the Thessaloniki article says that "Salonika" was written with a "c" and not a "k".
  • she proceeded to Wilhelmshaven and then back through the Skagerrak Link Wilhelmshaven.
    • Done
  • and Skagerrak to Bergen, Norway. She then steamed south across Norway was part of the Union Sweden and Norway so maybe pipe it to it?
    • Done
  • She was sold in 1892 to a Hamburg-based company Link Hamburg.
    • Done
  • the ship was operated by the firm Paulsen & Ivers Is there a link to the firm Paulsen & Ivers?
    • No, not that I'm aware of.
  • but was lost with all hands on her first voyage as a merchant ship on 20 January 1894 Remove the "on 20" with "in".
    • Done
  • No edit wars.

Infobox

  • No tonnes?
    • Good catch
  • No length of the long at the waterline?
    • I usually only do the overall length in the box
  • Link knots.
    • Done
  • Maybe add her renamed name in the infobox and the date or isn't that necessary?
    • Added.

Images

  • You have a great picture, hopefully, they'd become an FP. I can imagine that they'd be gorgeous.
    • Unfortunately, it chops off the front of the ship, but it's all I've been able to find.

Sources

  • Looks good to me.
  • No OR.
  • The sources are reliable and academic.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:37, 15 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks yet again! Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 16 September 2019 (UTC)Reply