Talk:SMS Preussischer Adler/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

Here am I again claiming my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:31, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

• SMS Preussischer Adler was a paddle steamer originally Where is the SMS note?\
  • Added
• she was capable of reaching 11.5 knots (21.3 km/h; 13.2 mph) from 990 PS (980 ihp) Link PS and ihp.
  • Both are already linked
• departed Kiel on 19 September and had reached Piraeus, Greece Pipe Greece to the Kingdom of Greece.
  • Done, but linked earlier
• From Brest, the ships steamed to Cherbourg, France Pipe France to the Second French Empire.
  • Done
• with Niels Juel and stopped in Den Helder, the Netherlands on 15 February Unlink the Netherlands.
  • Done
• the Danes to withdraw their blockade.[15][9] Re-order the refs here.
  • Done
• the soldiers as they engaged the defending Danish forces.[17][9] Same as above.
  • Guess I wasn't paying attention to that this time, eh?
• early career has a post steamer, she had a capacity to carry Replace "had a capacity to" with "could".
  • Done
• of the Prussian Navy after it had been refounded . We do not need a space before the dot.
  • Good catch
• thereafter seeing short periods of time in her training Remove "of time".
  • Done

Infobox

• Looks good to me.

Images

• File:Josef Carl Püttner Seegefecht bei Helgoland 1864.jpg's source link doesn't go to the picture?
  • Fixed
• File:SMS König Wilhelm at Gravesend.jpg has a dead link.
  • I can't sort this out right now (Flikr is blocked at work, for some reason) so I'll just remove it for the time being

Sources

• Some ISBNs use hyphens and others don't maybe standardise them.
  • Done
• Embree's book needs a Google Books' URL.
• The rest looks good to me.

That's anything from me. Sorry to be a little bit late, right now I'm a little bit struggling with my left index finger. I got a deep cut in it after I worked at home. Right now it wears a bandage which has the size of two key letters. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:28, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

That doesn't sound like much fun - I stabbed my hand opening a box for my daughter a couple of months ago, requiring a couple of stitches, and it was unpleasant to use that hand for a couple of weeks. Parsecboy (talk) 15:02, 9 September 2019 (UTC)

• I think it is good to go. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:18, 10 September 2019 (UTC)