Talk:SMS Sperber (1888)
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Reviewer: Dana boomer (talk · contribs) 23:22, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Hi! I'll take this article for review, and should have my full comments up by later tonight. Dana boomer (talk) 23:22, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I'm sure you've checked the IP addition from April 5 to make sure everything is solid there?
- Yeah, it's the standard note explaining SMS and the translation of the ship's name.
- Lead, "but was thereafter used as a target ship until 1918. She was thereafter sold" - close repetition of "thereafter".
- Changed the second one to "later"
- Second deployment abroad, "presence was unnecessary there." I think the "there" is unnecessary.
- Sounds fine to me.
- Second deployment abroad, "German East Africa to replace Bussard there." Again, the "there" doesn't seem to be adding anything.
- Removed.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Overall very solid, just a few minor comments on prose. Placing the article on hold until these can be addressed. Dana boomer (talk) 23:47, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks yet again, I think everything should be corrected. Parsecboy (talk) 12:10, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
- And again everything looks good, so passing to GA. Dana boomer (talk) 16:21, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks yet again, I think everything should be corrected. Parsecboy (talk) 12:10, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
- Overall very solid, just a few minor comments on prose. Placing the article on hold until these can be addressed. Dana boomer (talk) 23:47, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Sperber
editI have a Picture of my great grandfather who severed on the Sperber we always referred to him as sea Opa 76.66.175.168 (talk) 22:43, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
SMS Sperber
editupdate on Photo my great grandfather's name was Franz Leopold Kollandt. He served for a long time on SMS Sperber Diane Mills 76.66.175.168 (talk) 23:26, 22 October 2022 (UTC)