Talk:SMS Stein

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review
Good articleSMS Stein has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSMS Stein is part of the Screw corvettes of Germany series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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July 24, 2018Good article nomineeListed
October 12, 2019Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Lead " twelve 15 cm (5.9 in) guns" Infobox: 14 × 15 cm (5.9 in) guns. Prose: "15 cm (5.9 in) 22-caliber" I'm guessing the text is correct and infobox is wrong.
    • Fixed
  • Range: " 2,380 nautical miles (4,410 km; 2,740 mi) at a speed of 9 knots " Infobox: " 1,940 nmi (3,590 km; 2,230 mi) at 10 knots" On this one, both could be right, but the infobox's number would therefore been uncited.
    • Fixed
  • Draft: "5.2 m (17 ft) forward." in prose, " 6.3 m (20 ft 8 in)" in infobox
    • Fixed
  • Top speed: 13 in prose, 12 in infobox.
    • Fixed
  • "The keel for Stein, the last member of the Bismarck class" The lead says she was five of six?
    • The lead was wrong - funny how many silly mistakes you can make if you're not paying attention, eh?
  • "KAdm Louis" Could likely explain what rank a KAdm is, I think it is a real admiral equivalent?
  • Oh, reading on, I see you explain it on second usage, not first.
    • Whoops, I didn't realize I had missed the first one of those.
  • Well-written genreally, that's all I have to nitpick about. Courcelles (talk) 23:52, 23 July 2018 (UTC)Reply