Talk:SMS Württemberg (1917)/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

I will take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • No issues identified

Development

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  • additional funds for the Navy: suggest "additional funds for the Kaiserliche Marine (Imperial Navy)". The term is used in the lead but not main body of article.
    • Good idea
  • As work on the last member of the class began: I think it needs to explicitly specify at this point that Württemberg is that last member.
    • Done
  • to take advantage Wilhelm's good mood: should that be "to take advantage of Wilhelm's good mood"?
    • Good catch

Description

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  • Inconsistency in text and infobox as to number of 8.8cm guns.
    • Corrected
  • Ditto for the minimum armor thickness for the turrets.
    • Fixed
  • No mention of cruising range in body of article.
    • Added

Construction and cancellation

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  • No issues identified

References

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  • Hildebrand et al: no isbn?
    • Not that I can find. Curiously, the books don’t have them printed, and there’s no entry in Worldcat for the 8th volume.

Other stuff

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  • Image tags check out OK
  • No dupe or dab links
  • No external links so checks for these not necessary

A tidy article with minimal issues. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:34, 25 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

I'm satisfied that this article meets the GA criteria, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 02:07, 27 January 2020 (UTC)Reply