Talk:SM Mall of Asia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hchc2009 (talk · contribs) 16:50, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

There are quite a few issues with this article; I've highlighted the main ones below. If we can clear these us, I can go through in more detail. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:42, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

1. Well-written:

(a) the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct;

• Sections like "Esplanade" need proper paragraphs.

(b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

2. Factually accurate and verifiable:

(a) it provides references to all sources of information in the section(s) dedicated to the attribution of these sources according to the guide to layout;

• Some of the references links are broken (e.g. fn 1), others (e.g. fn3, fn 4) don't lead to any relevant piece.

(b) it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines;

• Sections like "Esplanade", "Physical details" and "Construction" (amongst others) are pretty much unreferenced.

(c) it contains no original research.

• The lack of citations at the moment means it would fail on OR.

Broad in its coverage:

(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;

(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by images:

(a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;

(b) images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.

• The gallery doesn't fit with the wikipedia image use policy.