Talk:SS Lac La Belle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "between Cleveland, and Lake Superior" no need for comma.
• "As of 2021, the wreck..." avoid single sentence para, merge that into the previous lead para.
• "Cleveland, Ohio by" comma after Ohio.
• "She was launched" last "she" was the sister ship.
• "her career ... her career..." repetitive.
• "on Lake Superior, sustaining" overlinked.
• "from Ontonagon, Michigan for" comma after Michigan.
• "St Clair River" not St. Clair River like before?
• "the Detroit Free Press reported" italics.
• Lee and Swayze refs need an en-dash not a spaced hyphen.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)