Talk:SS Ohio (1872)

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Stepshep in topic Assessment comment

Assessment comment

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  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. An extra paragraph on service history in the lead would be nice. [?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), armor (A) (British: armour), armour (B) (American: armor), harbor (A) (British: harbour), ageing (B) (American: aging).
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”.
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. §hep¡Talk to me! 03:20, 23 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

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