Talk:STRAT-X/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Sp33dyphil in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Σ (talk · contribs) 05:54, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
Though there is not a length requirement for GA, my immediate comment is that the article is a bit short, at 961 words. I've taken a quick look, and it looks pretty good. I'll probably finish the review sometime in the next hour. →Στc. 07:50, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Does study have to be linked?
- STRAT-X has been acknowledged by independent journalists as greatly influencing the U.S. nuclear posture. How was it influenced?
- Well, it did result in at least four weapons systems, and how the nuclear triad is operated. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 10:12, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
- This isn't a major point, but should that be added?
Background
edit- Were these ICBMs to be used operationally, they would have posed a significant risk to U.S. ICBMs. Needs a reference.
- Meanwhile... Please rephrase.
Study
edit- government red tape does not sound encyclopedic.
- In the end, a twenty-volume report covered no less than 125 different weapon-basing ideas, nine of which were reviewed in great detail.[1][4][3] Please reorder the references, so it results in Stuff.[1][3][4]
Findings and consequences
edit- Nevertheless, the former was only a prototype, while 50, out of the original 100, of the latter were fielded (the Peacekeeper had since been retired). Are commas (which have never been my strong point) after 50 and 100 necessary?
Legacy
edit- Per WP:ELPOINTS, external links in the body of an article are discouraged.
- All done. Done --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 10:12, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
Assessment
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Good enough for me.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail: