Talk:Safe-in-Sound Award

Latest comment: 10 days ago by Reconrabbit in topic Alert over promotional language

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Alert over promotional language

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Can someone review this to see if I sufficiently addressed the alert posted on January 2024? Thanks TMorata (talk) 03:14, 1 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

There still exist some statements that are of dubious use to a reader, for instance: Employees at all levels are engaged in the initiatives. Is this such a unique case that it contributes to the notability of Northrop-Grumman as an award recipient? Not related to promotional language, but an important note: External links such as those to www.caohc.org should not be directly in the text and should be instead in a reference or placed at the end of the article in the "external links" section. Reconrabbit 05:26, 1 September 2024 (UTC)Reply