Talk:Saint Mary School, Bordentown
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Willondon in topic Addition of advert template
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Addition of advert template
editSeveral characteristics of this article are written like an advertisement. For example, the section "Philosophy" is written in first person and in present tense, despite the school being defunct, about values of the school that is written like a fact rather than a neutral observation of the philosophy claimed by the school. These claims are not corroborated with neutral sources. The section "School life" is also written in first person, and ends with the biased sentence "St. Mary School develops the whole child." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.50.144.188 (talk) 17:38, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
- It is. I took care of removing two sections, and then removed the 'advert' tag. Hope that's what you were referring to. signed, Willondon (talk) 18:03, 22 May 2022 (UTC)