Necessary improvements to this draft

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Hello, after a quick look at the sources and text, I think I can improve this draft to an acceptable article by WP standards. (BTW I am the author of the article Photography in Sudan and therefore knowlegable about the subject.) This message is also intended for Salih Basheer, the author and subject of this draft: You have started in an overall acceptable way, but as this draft constitutes a Conflict of Interest and you are discouraged by our guidelines to write about yourself, I will have to check both the text and sources for WP standards. This might take some days, but you can check towards the end of December. In the meantime, I suggest you create a proper user account for further cooperation on WP. Regards, Munfarid1 (talk) 12:03, 23 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hello RegistryKey (talk), as you were right to decline the submission of this draft by the person featured in it, I have since updated it according to WP rules, and as an editor unrelated to the photographer Salih Basheer. I think, we could now publish it and would be happy to receive your opinion about this. Thanks, Munfarid1 (talk) 12:59, 2 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
As I am confident of having resolved all initial issues and have not had any response to this draft proposal for the last two weeks, I have just published it, according to WP:MTR. Munfarid1 (talk) 19:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

deletion of a controversy, as it was not referenced by reliable sources

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On Sep 12, I deleted a paragraph by Ahmedito 786 (user page doesn't exist), as the content of this aleged controversy was referenced only by Instagram and Twitter, that are no reliable sources. Munfarid1 (talk) 12:34, 12 September 2023 (UTC)Reply