Talk:Salt Lake Tabernacle organ/GA1
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Gary King in topic GA Review
GA Review
edit- I'd like to mention that this is a really short article in general. Is there really nothing more that can be added to it?
- The entire "Uses" section is unreferenced, leading readers to believe that it is Original Research (WP:OR). Please reference it accordingly.
- Remove the fixed width of the first image; there is no need for it to be so big, especially when it overshadows the text.
- Even though the article is short, the lead still needs to be expanded to better summarize the article's contents.
- Format the references according to WP:CITE/ES, preferably with {{cite web}}.
Gary King (talk) 22:24, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
- 7 days have passed and these issues have not been addressed. This article has therefore been failed. Gary King (talk) 21:54, 3 July 2008 (UTC)