So-called re-write produced ambiguity and some factual errors. The biographer of the book himself was pleased with the original article (See Talk:Richard More (Mayflower passenger). It is a complicated story and should not be "gutted". Mugginsx (talk) 12:05, 4 May 2015 (UTC)Reply
I stumbled upon this intriguing account of a tragic historical event, and agree with Mugginex that it deserves
better treatment. Some sections contain grammatical errors as
well as glaring ambiguities, rendering them practically incomprehensible. I hope that someone with the requisite
knowledge of the topic will restore order to this confusing,
albeit fact-laden article.108.7.254.132 (talk) 04:07, 23 April 2016 (UTC)Reply