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NPOV, etc...
editThis is not an article written in NPOV page. The first step will beto remove the word influential -- we don't make that judgment, the sources need to show it. The e second will be to refer to him as he, without repeating the name each time. The third more important one is not to say things lie "During this time, he helped return the university to its or" -- this istotally vague. He was chairman of the Board of Governers so he presumably approved, but even that's OR. NPOV language is to say sometining like "During his time as governor..., the University moved..... " If nobody else makes the changes, I shall.
Please do not remove my tag without makign the changes, or alternatively,discusssing the matter here. DGG ( talk ) 07:56, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
- I see there was considerable improvement; I did some more. When the article gives multiple examples of his support for the Hebrew University, It does not add anything to also have a sentence: He supported the Hebrew University . DGG ( talk ) 23:29, 3 June 2021 (UTC)