Talk:Samurai Harem: Asu no Yoichi

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Cyberbot II in topic External links modified

Title change

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the title of this should be ASU NO YOICHI instead of ASHITA, if you look at the japanese wiki page for this manga.

remove the ! in the hyperlink, it causes problems on forums when linking what do you think? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.128.160.240 (talk) 21:47, 7 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
That's not our problem. The exclamation point is part of the title, therefore the article name uses it. If some certain forum software doesn't happen to be robust enough to properly escape it and other special characters, it's a problem with the forum software and should not be corrected by moving an article away from its proper title here. That being said, I went ahead and created the redirect Asu no Yoichi as a probable search term. ダイノガイ千?!? · Talk⇒Dinoguy1000 21:53, 7 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Merge

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There's a merge tag on the talk page but not on the article. And which article(s) should this article be merged to? Extremepro (talk) 22:48, 16 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

No idea, merge may have already been done.-- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 03:58, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Characters

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Some of the characters have their voice actors picked for them already but I cannot remember what their character are like so I cannot describe them, since I haven't read the manga for a while. Help would be greatly appreciated. Extremepro (talk) 00:40, 17 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Anime isn't being released until August 2009, so no need to have possible voice actors at all. Nor should they be put at the front, as its primary work is the manga, not the non-existant anime. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 03:58, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
Okay Extremepro (talk) 03:59, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Image

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Would like an image of Asu no Yoichi! manga cover for the infobox. Extremepro (talk) 01:45, 17 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Japanese Names

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Is there a rule to writing them? I know that the order for the name is "Family-given" for Japanese and that kanji is preferred for the surname. But does the rule apply for the given name? and can the given name be written in hirigana / katakana? Extremepro (talk) 05:44, 17 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Per WP:MOS-AM, you should always write the English names in Western order, and in Japanese order for the kanji and romaji versions. Hope that helps. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 03:48, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
Sure does. Thanks Extremepro (talk) 03:49, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

Angela vs Angura

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On most translations of the manga, it's Angela. Extremepro (talk) 05:15, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

If you just translate her name in Romaji, its Anjura. But it is a european name and it would be Angela. Its pretty hard to decide, I guess. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ishikawa Gensui (talkcontribs) 01:43, 28 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
As the series is not licensed, the straight romaji should be used: Anjura, not what scanslators are using. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 01:45, 28 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
Yeah you are right. Anyway I will add her character profile now, using the romaji then. --Ishikawa Gensui (talk) 01:49, 28 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
I'm assuming no one actually reads the raw japanese versions. Its not licensed, but there IS an actual romanization from the mangaka. That's not just a generally accepted fan romanization. The writer himself has it romanized as "Angela". Unless you want to argue the mangaka's wrong about his own manga, that's about as official as it gets at this point. 76.105.46.150 (talk) 09:45, 1 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

Citations

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References might be needed for the manga release dates. However, most of the sites, like http://www.akitashoten.co.jp/index2.html (Akita Shoten homepage), are in Japanese and my Japanese is elementary. Help please? Extremepro (talk) 10:18, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

After I sleep a bit (just drove 4 hours), I'll add in the refs. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 14:14, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
Thanks a lot. Extremepro (talk) 22:38, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
And done. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 23:04, 27 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

List of Asu no Yoichi! episodes

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Should there a link under "Anime" linking to "List of Asu no Yoichi! episodes" for the episode list?Extremepro (talk) 00:50, 14 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

No, as the article doesn't exist. And until the series is longer, one isn't needed. At least not until maybe 13 episodes and then only if they have summaries. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 01:40, 14 January 2009 (UTC)Reply

taking a look

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I was asked to look at this article, and so I have looked. I might not tell you much more than you already know, but here goes. The first thing that strikes me is that there is very little context for the character listing - there is no plot section. I don't know why this has a "too much plot" tag, but I suspect it is due to the slimness of the reception section when compared to the character list. The volume list needs individual summaries, the reception section needs expanding. The character list needs copyediting (esp. in regards to American/"British" spellings, but also in the general 'I've never seen this before, and I am really really confused' sense...) - also, if you could find creator commentary, it would be great if you could add some to this section. I gather there is a movement away from having character sections in articles, so having some out of universe information here could be a good idea if you wish to keep a discrete character section. Stuff on the anime needs its tense checked (the anime's finished airing, so it should be in past-tense). I question the "May 2009" information about the manga, as the citation seems to be from 2008... After this, I would suggest checking around in the relevant places to see if there's any new information that could be incorporated. Has it been licensed in English or any other languages? The very last thing that should be done is expanding the lead, making sure it meets WP:LEAD. It's often easiest to do this last, as by the time you do so, you understand the rest of it enough to summarise it efficiently. You may wish to consult the fiction Manual of Style for further advice. I've marked up the text with some {{clarifyme}} templates to mark where I had the most difficulty understanding the article, as I've never seen the show. --Malkinann (talk) 12:40, 13 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Should I make a section that compares the differences between the anime and the manga? Extremepro (talk) 03:00, 14 April 2009 (UTC)Reply
I don't think so - that kind of a section tends to be a original research attractant. --Malkinann (talk) 03:34, 14 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

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