Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2015/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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One of your two Eurovision nominees, so I will help axe this from the queue! --K. Peake 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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Background

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  • Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest
  • "Their debut entry" → "The nation's debut entry"
  • "failed to qualify to the final" → "failed to qualify for the [[San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Grand final|grand final" with the target
  • Target semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Semi-final 1 to lead to the one the country competed in
  • "the final." → "the grand final." with the target
  • "Between 2012 and 2014," → "From 2012 to 2014,"
  • Add a source for Jürgens' years or reword to mentioning them being in the 1960s
  • "to the final," → "for the grand final;"
  • "to bring San Marino" → "to bring the nation"
  • "that the nation would" → "that San Marino would"

Before Eurovision

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Internal selection

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  • Img looks good!
  • "at SMRTV's studios." → "at the broadcaster's studios."
  • "while Simoncini represented" → "while Simoncini had represented"
  • Lowercase the Peppermints per MOS:THEMUSIC
  • "when she turned sixteen." → "when she turned 16." per MOS:NUM
  • "had composed twenty-three" → "had composed 23" but this sentence is not sourced
  • "Seventeen of those entries were written together with Meinunger." → "17 of those entries were written together with Bernd Meinunger."
  • "for the contest," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest,"
  • "These adaptations included..." this sentence is not sourced

Promotion

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  • "on 16 March." → "on 16 March 2015."
  • "organization MEI, and record label" → "organization MEI and record label" with the wikilink
  • "The duo also embarked" → "Simoncini and Perniola also embarked"

At Eurovision

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Semi-final

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  • Img looks good!
  • "Anita Simoncini and Michele Perniola took part" → "Simoncini and Perniola took part"
  • "20 and 21 May." → "20 and 21 May 2015."
  • Wikilink Antonello Carozza
  • "in a white dress shirt," → "in a white shirt,"
  • "that becomes covered" → "that became covered"
  • "failed to qualify to" → "failed to qualify for"
  • "among the top ten nations." → "among the top 10 nations." per MOS:NUM

Voting

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  • The second sentence does not appear to be sourced
  • "This jury was" are you sure it was only them and not all of the jury?
  • "and that the" → "and how the"
  • [36] should be solely at the end of the para since it is used for the last two sentences
  • "and grand final" → "and the grand final"
  • "San Marino scored six" → "the nation scored six"
  • "in the second semi-final and grand final of the contest," → "in the contest's second semi-final and grand final, respectively,"
Points awarded to San Marino
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  • Good
Points awarded by San Marino
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  • Good
Detailed jury voting results
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  • There should not be two dashes after Barbara Andreini
  • No sources are provided for the tables below

References

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Final comments and verdict

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Should be all set now, but just note that it's not original research if the sources are just unclear! Thanks for reviewing! Grk1011 (talk) 18:17, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Grk1011 I do understand the difference but thank you for recognising potential confusion, though where is the second sentence of the voting sub-section backed up? --K. Peake 18:18, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
It is in the source provided for that section, specifically for those 3 claims it reads:
Since last year, the European Broadcasting Union announces the list of national jury members in advance.
Members of the jury must pursue a profession in or related to the music industry;
Members of the jury shall be citizens of the country they represent;
If you're concerned about the "five", I can move up the source from the next section? Hope this helps. Grk1011 (talk) 18:29, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Grk1011 Yes that is what I am concerned about, please invoke the source using a refname. --K. Peake 19:37, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
All set! Grk1011 (talk) 19:44, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply
Grk1011  Pass, apologies if this took a while longer than your previous GANs due to the confusion over the ref! --K. Peake 19:55, 10 February 2021 (UTC)Reply