Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2017/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
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I will review this soon; hopefully you will succeed in promoting this GT ultimately! --K. Peake 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Wikilink Ralph Siegel in the infobox
- Swap the order of the other two songwriters per the body
- "and the completion of a tour that included a stops in" → "and promotional performances in" per the body
- "San Marino performed tenth" → "San Marino performed 10th" per MOS:NUM
- Shouldn't the Eurovision Song Contest final sub-section be retitled to grand final like most have been and then you fix the pipe accordingly?
Done except the last one. There is a bit of a disagreement about how we want to refer to it. I'll update it to whatever term is decided when that happens. Grk1011 (talk) 15:09, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Grk1011 It is best not to update it until the discussion is resolved, to avoid stability issues. --K. Peake 15:55, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
Background
edit- You should add a comma after "next two entries" and one after 2016 for correct separation
- "San Marino was included on the European Broadcasting Union's (EBU) list" → "the European Broadcasting Union (EBU) included San Marino on their list"
Done
Before Eurovision
editInternal selection
edit- Pipe SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
- "On 7 March 2017, SMRTV Director General" → "On 7 March 2017, Radiotelevisione della Repubblica di San Marino (SMRTV) director general" with the pipe
- Unless I missed something in the wording, the studios part is not sourced
- Pipe 2012, 2013 and 2014 to their respective Eurovision articles
- "2012 through 2015." → "2012 through to 2015."
- The first sentence of SMRTV's response does not appear to be properly sourced
- "to represent that nation;" → "to represent the nation;"
Done
Promotion
edit- "were filmed by" → "was filmed by"
- "on 24 March" → "on 24 March 2017"
- "where they performed" → "where they performed the song"
- "On 8 April, they performed during the ninth edition" → "On 8 April 2017, the two performed during the ninth annual edition"
- Remove wikilink on Spain
Done
At Eurovision
edit- "at International Exhibition Centre" → "at the International Exhibition Centre"
- Remember my earlier comment about the grand final pipe, if it is fully relevant
- Even though the countries not needing to qualify is sourced, that being part of the Eurovision Rules is not
- "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) split up" → "The EBU split up"
- The favourable voting histories part is not sourced
- Pipe second semi final to Eurovision Song Contest 2017#Semi-final 2
- "on 13 April" → "on 13 April 2017"
- The Radio San Marino broadcast is not sourced
Done
Semi-final
edit- Img looks good!
- "in dress rehearsals on" → "in respective dress rehearsals on"
- "on 10 May," → "on 10 May 2017,"
- Monetta's outfit is sourced as black and white, but Wilson's is only sourced as black so reword accordingly
- The chandelier is unsourced
- Last para looks good!
Done
Voting
edit- Whole sub-section looks good apart from Fabrizio Raggi appearing not to be sourced as a chairperson, unless that's what Juror A indicates?
Done
References
edit- Copyvio score looks quite good at 20.6%
- Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
- Cite Quotidiano.net as publisher instead for ref 14
- Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 15 and 31 plus add SMRTV in brackets for both and wikilink San Marino RTV on the first ref
- Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 25
Done
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; neat article like your previous ones, though! --K. Peake 17:48, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- I believe I addressed all the issues you noted. Let me know if I missed anything! Grk1011 (talk) 23:34, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- Grk1011 ✓ Pass now, you have implemented everything as far as I can see apart from the grand final point, but you have a valid reason not to! --K. Peake 07:38, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
- I believe I addressed all the issues you noted. Let me know if I missed anything! Grk1011 (talk) 23:34, 14 March 2021 (UTC)