Talk:Sara Northrup Hollister/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review

GA Review

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I shall be reviewing this page against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:32, 12 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

Quick fail criteria assessment

  1. The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability.
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  2. The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.
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  3. There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including cleanup, wikify, NPOV, unreferenced or large numbers of fact, clarifyme, or similar tags.
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  4. The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars.
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  5. The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint.
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Passes when checked against quick fail criteria, on to substantive review. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:42, 12 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria

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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    • Lead: ...was the second wife of L. Ron Hubbard, from 1946-1951, and of Miles Hollister from 1951 to her death in 1997. Clarity - was she the second wife of Hollister as well? Y
    b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    • Adequately referenced. I assume good faith as there no online sources.
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    • All sources appear reliable
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  3. It is broad in its scope.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
Only GA Hold concern appears to have been a minor grammar issue. Fixed [1]. Cirt (talk) 20:27, 12 September 2009 (UTC)Reply
That is possibly less precise, though - if she was his 2nd wife as well, then the article may as well say so. --Tango (talk) 23:05, 12 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

OK, my concern has been fixed the sentence is clear now. Passing as a Good Article, Congratulations and thanks for your hard work. Jezhotwells (talk) 00:20, 13 September 2009 (UTC)Reply