Talk:Sarcoscypha occidentalis/GA1

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Reviewer: Ucucha 18:51, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Lead could be longer, I think

• Added a bit. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Still on the short side, I think—but enough for GA.

• Images and graphics are crammed at the top and could be moved a little down, where it's more lonely.

• I moved the image in the description section down a bit, but can't see an easy way to adjust anything else.

• Molliardiomyces

• ? Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Sorry, should have taken that out before saving. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• What are paraphyses?

• Added a parenthetical def'n. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• The alt text under "Similar species" shouldn't be there or should be real alt text.

• Leftover from copy/paste. Removed. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Does this add anything or is it too esoteric?

Title: Spore ontogeny in species of Sarcoscypha

Author(s): Li, LT

Source: MYCOLOGIA Volume: 87 Issue: 6 Pages: 749-758 Published: NOV-DEC 1995

• I thought about it, but decided that since it was difficult for me to follow, it was probably too esoteric for Wikipedia. If I decide to take this article to FAC, I'll try to translate it from jargon to English and add a summary paragraph. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• According to Web of Knowledge, the Harrington 1990 cite has "North-America" instead of "North America" in its title.

• I checked the original, it does not have the hyphen. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• This is in Japanese and old, but could add some information:

Title: SARCOSCYPHINEAE OF JAPAN

Author(s): OTANI Y

Source: Nippon Kingakukai Kaiho Volume: 21 Issue: 2 Pages: 149-179 Published: 1980

• Unfortunately, my Japanese is limited to どうもありがとうミスターロボット. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Perhaps ask for help when you want to get on to FAC. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Same for this, except it's not in Japanese

Title: SOME STIPITATE DISCOMYCETES OF IOWA USA

Author(s): JENSEN R D

Source: Iowa State Journal of Research Volume: 52 Issue: 1 Pages: 37-52 Published: 1977

• I can't access this one, but I doubt it says much more than it's present in Iowa. Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

That's also the impression I got from the abstract. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

Overall, only a few small problems. The article is thin but I presume nothing else is known. Ucucha 18:51, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks for the speedy review! Sasata (talk) 20:03, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

And thanks for the speedy response. I am passing this as a GA now; it appears to pass all criteria. Ucucha 20:11, 3 April 2010 (UTC)