Talk:Sarvam/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: –– Jezhotwells (talk) 14:33, 4 April 2010 (UTC)Reply


I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Checking against GA criteria

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    Very poorly written throughout, this article requires a thorough copy edit for grammar, tense, style, clarity and readability. Nowhere near GA standard.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    One dead link has been tagged.
    What makes Behindwoods a reliable source? I can find no statement of editorial policy or evidence that the site is regarded as a reliable source by other quality sources.
    Ayngaran, as a film distributor is not a reliable source, rather a primary source. Use with care
    Kollywood today looks like a wiki to me, not a reliable source.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    OK, the main point is that this is very poorly written. There is also some doubtful sourcing. I cannot complete the review until the article is written in good clear English. After advising the nominator to get submissions copy-edited, they asked me to carry on reviewing, so I have done so, but if it cannot be brought up to standard in seven days, I shall fail the nomination. On hold until 11 April. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 15:02, 4 April 2010 (UTC)Reply
    As the nominator has removed the nomination from the list at WP:GAN, i shall close this review as not listed. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 16:10, 4 April 2010 (UTC)Reply