Talk:Say Anything (BoJack Horseman)/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by AryKun in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:02, 12 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed
  • Link bender.
    Done
  • "and the title character with" → "and for the title character, with" also
    Done
  • Link bourbon.
    Done
  • Link Cate Blanchett.
    Done
  • "series. Lawson has written" → "series; Lawson has subsequently also written"
    Changed to "series; Lawson has subsequently written other Bojack Horseman episodes, such as" (felt the also was redundant)
  • "theme, instead it is replaced with 'Impossible'" → "theme, instead playing 'Impossible'"
    Done
  • "perspective which Netflix" → "perspective, which Netflix"
    Done
  • "Bojack to in" → "Bojack to be in"
    Done
  • "of The A.V. Club in a" → "of The A.V. Club, in a"
    Done
  • 'and "Say Anything" gets' → Say Anything should be in single quotes as it's already part of a quote.
    Done
  • The last three paragraphs of Reception should all be merged into one para.
    Done
  • References are all reliable and consistently formatted.

@AryKun: Thank you very much for the review. I have responded above and made the respective changes.  Spy-cicle💥  Talk? 20:13, 15 May 2022 (UTC)Reply