Talk:Say You Will (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 22:28, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

Will review this as soon as I get school and graduation out of the way. Shoot for the Stars 💫 (talk) 22:28, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

Background and recording

I think the "Outside of the song, English musician Mr Hudson co-wrote fellow 808s & Heartbreak track "Street Lights" and contributed a feature to "Paranoid" sentence should come way later as this would be confusing to readers who don't know anything about Kanye or his songs. What song are you talking about when you say "outside of the song"?

It is only referring to Mr Hudson's contributions to songs on the album, which is already introduced as being by West in the lead... plus background for musicians is supposed to come first in this section. Change the song to "Say You Will", though. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• musicOMH does not say the song has "synth-pop production" but the rather the whole album.

• It says that the song sets the tone for the album's synth-pop production. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

Release and reception

This part "The song was met with generally positive reviews from music critics, mostly being identified by them as an album highlight" needs to be referenced.

• The guideline about combining multiple points to reach a conclusion not explicitly stated by them does not apply when its a reception section, as it can be seen how much of the reviews are positive/negative so you can write that. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

References

• copyvio score says it's 95.8% from some bs [1] website! Lets just ignore that crap. The score is below 40% and looks fine.
• This link is not working.

• The GA criteria says that dead links do not prevent a pass; this especially applies here because I've added an archive. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

Overall

Putting  On hold for seven days. You know I'm shooting for the stars, aiming for the moon 💫 (talk) 22:16, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Shoot for the Stars I have responded to all of your points above. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)