Talk:Say You to Yo Asobi

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:39, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

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• ... that the Japanese variety show Say You to Yo Asobi collaborated with the Japan Racing Association and to feature the race horse Takarazuka Kinen?Source: Oricon (article): 番組と連動した『JRA×「声優と夜あそび 2021」宝塚記念チャレンジ』サイトでは、木曜日、金曜日のMC陣が、宝塚記念を予想した動画を特別公開。 [On the "JRA x Say You to Yo Asobi 2021 "Takarazuka Kinen Challenge" website linked to the program, the MC team on Thursday and Friday will release a special video with their predictions on Takarazuka Kinen.]

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Created by Lullabying (talk). Self-nominated at 22:40, 3 October 2021 (UTC).

• The article seems to mostly be okay at first glance and the hook fact is cited inline. However, even as a seiyuu fan myself, I'm not really a fan of the hook as currently written, it seems a bit niche and may not appeal to those who aren't into Japanese voice acting. I think there's some potential with the horse angle, but the hook will need to be copy-edited and rewritten to focus mainly on that instead. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:08, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review; the hook doesn't focus on voice acting itself but more on the show, which is what the article is about. lullabying (talk) 23:40, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

I think it would be a good idea to specifically focus on the challenges done with the horse, rather than mentioning the JRA. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:44, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

• Then, how about: "... that the Japanese variety show Say You to Yo Asobi collaborated with the Japan Racing Association to create a special video about Takarazuka Kinen?" lullabying (talk) 06:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

It sounds better, but it may be a good idea to mention that Takarazuka Kinen is a racehorse, just in case those unfamiliar with the JRA think they may be about a different kind of racing (like for example motorsports). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:59, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

• Then, ALT1 ... that the Japanese variety show Say You to Yo Asobi collaborated with the Japan Racing Association to create a special video about racehorse Takarazuka Kinen? lullabying (talk) 21:23, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

I think that sounds better. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:51, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Narutolovehinata5 what's next? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 08:28, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Well for one thing I had to fix the bolding of the new proposal (which I've labeled as ALT1). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 16:00, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: do you approve the hook, then? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 22:44, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

• Rereading the article again, it reads much better and meets DYK requirements. A QPQ has been performed. While I think ALT1 is written better than the original, after taking a second look at the article, the hook doesn't actually match the article wording. The hook says that a "special video" was created, but the article instead mentions challenges done with the horse. Either the article or the hook needs to be revised to reconcile the differences. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:56, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

• Prose changed to match hook. lullabying (talk) 07:01, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you, I think there are no more issues so we should be good to go with ALT1. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:32, 7 November 2021 (UTC)