Talk:Scarlet-and-white tanager

Latest comment: 3 years ago by AryKun in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk07:14, 8 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by AryKun (talk). Self-nominated at 13:00, 3 September 2021 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   AGF on paywalled Birds of the World source. Joofjoof (talk) 11:18, 5 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

ALT1 to T:DYK/P3

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:36, 30 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • What's a "median stripe"?
I've adee.
  • "It feed mainly" feeds.
Fixed.
  • It is... repeated several times in the lead. Perhaps switch one or two out for the name of the species for variety.
Done.
  • "P.L. Sclater" -> "P. L. Sclater"
Done.
  • "in Remedios, Antioquia" which country?
Added.
  • "Union (IOC). Alternative" you never use IOC so not sure of the purpose of abbreviating it.
Removed.
  • "scarlet and white tanager" and "scarlet-white tanager" alt names are normally given in bold and plausible redirects can be created from them to this article if they don't already exist.
Bolded and created redirects.
  • Link body parts again in the prose.
Done.
  • "non-migratory" link appropriately.
Linked.
  • Can we say what IUCN means?
Not sure what you mean.
  • Red list was mentioned in the lead but not in the main article, don't have details in the lead which aren't in the main article.
Added to body.
  • Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen, needs to be en-dash.
Fixed. AryKun (talk) 04:12, 2 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 1 October 2021 (UTC)Reply