Talk:Scent rubbing

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Christinaelizabeth in topic Peer Review: Christina Murphy

Peer Review: Emily Rowe

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Overall I thought the content was really good! I think the lead tells everyone exactly what scent rubbing is and highlights the main points. Toward the end of the lead, it seemed like the sentences were a little disconnected, I think they just need to flow into each other a little bit better. Under the heading Felis Catusthere is a small typo you have "an" instead of "and". Besides that, I would just expand your paragraphs a bit if possible.

Peer Review: Christina Murphy

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Overall, the article is very informative and well written. I thought your lead was very well done however i would add something about age and gender differences into your lead. I also think you could benefit by providing an image of an animal carrying out the behaviour. Other than that I think you could also benefit by adding more detail into your sections following the lead. Overall i think this was very well done! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Christinaelizabeth (talkcontribs) 19:10, 18 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Criticism as Praxis

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 February 2022 and 23 April 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jalyssabeamer (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Teresa Michella Da Silva, AshlynkD, Tylerharris33.