Talk:Scott County Library System

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Netalarm

If the contact information were deleted with this page follow the guidelines recommended? If that is what caused the problem I can easily edit that out, I just put in what information i could glean from the website and from a couple articles and books on the system. The article is still a work in progress and I realize that I still need references and am still working on some aspects of the page including the information under history and the design of the article.

Thanks bookworm3838 (talk) 22:09, 17 September 2009 (UTC)TJ ReedReply

yes that would help, it looks a little too like promotional material, you also need to add some 3rd party refs and inline citations GainLine 22:36, 17 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

ok, what else would you recommend doing to make it seem less like promotional material? I am trying to kinda follow the format of Davenport Public Library and yet tailor it to the differences, such as they are one library we are a system.

bookworm3838 (talk) 22:42, 17 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

I've removed the contact information and pictures. Those pictures could be included, but in a way that makes it seem less promotional. Are you affiliated with the library in any way? Netalarmtalk 04:10, 20 September 2009 (UTC)Reply