Talk:Screams of Silence: The Story of Brenda Q/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Matthew R Dunn in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew R Dunn (talk · contribs) 19:27, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hello, I shall be reviewing the article. -- Matthew RD 19:27, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Pretty much a tick from the GA criteria, but there are the odd outstanding issues to take care of.

  • The lead says the episode received mixed to negative reviews, but the reception section says thatb the reviews were mixed, but the media reaction to the central theme of domestic abuse was criticised.
  • "Reviews of the episode were mostly mixed, with one critic saying of the storyline "A serious episode of Family Guy cripples the show’s strengths."" I think it's nice to have a statement summing what one thought of the episode, but I'd like the end of the sentence cited (even if it is by McFarland).

I'll place the article on hold for seven days. -- Matthew RD 17:52, 10 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thank you, that's a pass, and just so you know, when I left you the message a couple of days ago, I noitced there are other reviewed episodes awaiting your reply. -- Matthew RD 02:10, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply