Talk:Se Me Olvidó Otra Vez/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
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This should be over and done with soon! --K. Peake 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- The B-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
- WP:OVERLINK of Juan Gabriel under songwriter(s)
- "from his fourth studio album," → "for his fourth studio album,"
- "It is a ranchera song that" → "The song is a ranchera number that"
- "who loved her." → "who loved a woman."
- "The track was released as" → "It was released as"
- ""Se Me Olvido Otra Vez" has been" → "The song has been"
- "has re-recorded the track twice," → "has re-recorded the song twice,"
- Add a comma after Por Los Siglos (2001)
- Wikilink live album
- "was also met with positive reactions" → "also received positive reactions"
- Pipe 2000 to 1st Annual Grammy Awards
- "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"
Background and composition
edit- Remove the comma before El Alma Joven
- Remove the comma after mariachi songs
- "composed all the track" → "composed all the tracks"
Promotion and reception
edit- Wikilink live album
- Pipe compilation to Compilation album
Maná version
edit- Infobox looks good!
- "on their second live" → "on their second live album"
- "called their performance of" → "called the performance of"
- "A writer Radio Programas del Perú" → "A writer for Radio Programas del Perú"
- "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"
Charts
edit- Should a col really be used when there are only two positions for each and the formatting creates a lot of white space on my screen?
See also
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks fab at 9.9%!!!
- For the refs citing Google Books urls, use via Google Books with the wikilink on the first instance
- Wikilink ProQuest on ref 1
- Wikilink AllMusic on ref 4 instead of ref 6
- Wikilink La Opinión on ref 13
- Wikilink The New York Times on ref 19
- Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 20
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this one! --K. Peake 09:50, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done Erick (talk) 18:27, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
- Magiciandude You still need to source and mention the B-side in the body, add speech marks around it in the infobox and change met with to received positive reactions in the lead. --K. Peake 10:31, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Done Thank you for catching those. Erick (talk) 15:19, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, thanks for picking these up in the end! --K. Peake 08:57, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Done Thank you for catching those. Erick (talk) 15:19, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
- Magiciandude You still need to source and mention the B-side in the body, add speech marks around it in the infobox and change met with to received positive reactions in the lead. --K. Peake 10:31, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done Erick (talk) 18:27, 18 December 2022 (UTC)