Talk:Se Me Olvidó Otra Vez/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

This should be over and done with soon! --K. Peake 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • The B-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
  • WP:OVERLINK of Juan Gabriel under songwriter(s)
  • "from his fourth studio album," → "for his fourth studio album,"
  • "It is a ranchera song that" → "The song is a ranchera number that"
  • "who loved her." → "who loved a woman."
  • "The track was released as" → "It was released as"
  • ""Se Me Olvido Otra Vez" has been" → "The song has been"
  • "has re-recorded the track twice," → "has re-recorded the song twice,"
  • Add a comma after Por Los Siglos (2001)
  • Wikilink live album
  • "was also met with positive reactions" → "also received positive reactions"
  • Pipe 2000 to 1st Annual Grammy Awards
  • "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Background and composition

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  • Remove the comma before El Alma Joven
  • Remove the comma after mariachi songs
  • "composed all the track" → "composed all the tracks"

Promotion and reception

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Maná version

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "on their second live" → "on their second live album"
  • "called their performance of" → "called the performance of"
  • "A writer Radio Programas del Perú" → "A writer for Radio Programas del Perú"
  • "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Charts

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  • Should a col really be used when there are only two positions for each and the formatting creates a lot of white space on my screen?

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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