Talk:Seattle Is Dying

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Ad Orientem in topic Improvement

Improvement

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I have added some changes according to the NPOV request made in this page. Send me a message if you have questions. Thanks! Darwin Naz (talk) 22:42, 29 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

I've also done some editing and toned down some of the wording which treats claims in the documentary as fact and often employed wording that was not NPOV. IMO the article needs a section dealing with critical response to the documentary. Currently there is just a single very bland sentence. -Ad Orientem (talk) 17:58, 1 August 2019 (UTC)Reply