Talk:Seattle Weather Collective

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Fledglingrsrchr in topic Opening with a capsule summary

Opening with a capsule summary

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This entry would benefit from the customary lead, a capsule summary of the entry and its noteworthiness. Please see topically related pages for examples. Historytrain (talk) 19:11, 18 May 2012 (UTC)Reply


Have you considered adding a "See Also" or a "Links" section in which you could link back to the Weather Underground page and/or the List of collectives? Fledglingrsrchr (talk) 16:18, 24 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Rewrite of Article Needed 2013

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Will start a rewrite on this article. It needs expansion. Needs to include subsequent development and actions of Seattle Weatherman collective, including the 1974 bank robbery and shootout in Tukwila that killed Bruce Seidel. As well as the role and fate of Susan Stern. And the relationship of Seattle Weather to Seattle Liberation Front, The Day After protests and the capture of Matthew Landy Steen in the same bank branch 2 years earlier. So, will do some research for additional citations. But will clean-up syntax, grammar and readability.Weathervane13 03:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Weathervane13 (talkcontribs)