Talk:Second Battle of Algeciras/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Thurgate in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 18:12, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    prose:   (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
     
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions): 
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

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1. in a calm in the close confines of Algeciras Bay. Suggest - I may be being dim here but what do you mean by calm?

2. evading much of by. Suggest - evading much of it by

3. Real Carlos firing randomly at the British ship but failing to strike it once during the brief engagement. Suggest - Real Carlos fired randomly at the British ship but failed to strike it once during the brief engagement

4. Hood holding off from reply until 05:20. Suggest - Hood holding off from replying until 05:20

5. Finally, the Spanish. Suggest - Also, the Spanish

I also suggest you sort out the article talkpage template as at the moment it looks a tad bare.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 18:12, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

All done, thanks very much for the review.--Jackyd101 (talk) 20:04, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply
Passed. Good job Jacky and good luck with your project! Thurgate (talk) 21:26, 9 May 2012 (UTC)Reply