Talk:Second Battle of Kitshanga
Latest comment: 9 months ago by Bastun in topic Draftified
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editHi Jebiguess, I have moved this article to Draft space as it's not currently ready for mainspace. After following recommendations for improvement, please submit the draft through the WP:AFC process. Suggestions:
- The lede needs to be clearer. What year did the battle take place?
- Who or what is M23 - the link you've used is to a disambiguation page, and all the linked articles are roads.
- The first three references are bare URLs (and therefore prone to link rot) - please provide full-format references.
- Incorrect date formats used in several references.
- Copyedit to clarify abbreviations, etc.
When these issues are fixed, and the article has been moved back to mainspace, please include in appropriate Categories and Wikiprojects. Regards, BastunĖġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 15:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
- Just fixed most of the issues above, the article should be a lot better now. Jebiguess (talk) 17:33, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
- You have fixed some of the issues, not all. I asked yo uto submit the article through the WP:AFC process; if an article has been moved to draft space, there is good reason, and best practice is to not move the article back yourself. BastunĖġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 17:38, 30 January 2024 (UTC)