Talk:Second Battle of Naktong Bulge

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:08, 5 March 2011 (UTC)  Doing... Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:08, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Shouldn't the map be better than the tank in the infobox? Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:11, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
  • There isn't a map that covers this battle in any detail. The only map there is used in all the Pusan Perimeter articles, and it covers far too large an area to be useful. —Ed!^(talk) 14:34, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
• There were occasional attacks 9th Infantry forward positions, but to the men in the front line this appeared to be only normal patrol action. → There were occasional attacks on the 9th Infantry's forward positions, but to the men in the front lines this appeared to be only normal patrol action.
  • Not to mention the grammatical errors, patrol action is never normal, since it only takes place during warfare. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 01:33, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
    • Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 01:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• Could you give the dates of the phases of the battle on the headers? I frequently ask for this as it helps navigation. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:32, 18 March 2011 (UTC)
  • Not practically. The article covers several small battles happening simultaneously across the river front, so most of them have the same dates. Info is broken up by location, not time. —Ed!^(talk) 19:22, 24 March 2011 (UTC)
• ROK units. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 14:56, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:28, 2 April 2011 (UTC)

Passed. FAC Wikicopter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 21:13, 3 April 2011 (UTC)