Talk:Secret Santa (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

• Grabbing for a review if that is okay. Aoba47 (talk) 22:42, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• I am not sure if “Christmas music” qualifies as a genre; the main article about it mentions how it often includes multiple genres. I am not sure if it should be in the genre parameter of the infobox. I would remove it.
• I have told in the past that the wikilink for “music critics” is not necessary.
• For this sentence (Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his Instagram account on Christmas Eve in 2018.), you are missing the name of the artist.

Background and recording

• For this part (Before the upcoming holiday season,), I do not think that “upcoming” is necessary as it is clear from the context of the rest of the sentence.
• For this sentence (On December 24, 2018, Italian singer-songwriter released a cover of "Secret Santa" to his official Instagram account.), you are missing the name of the artist.

Composition

• I am uncertain if the block quote is necessary for this article as Stefani is talking the album as a whole rather than this specific song. It is probably more appropriate for the article on the album instead, as a reader may assume that the quote is about the song.
• Unlink “Santa Baby” here as you already have it linked in a previous section.

Reception

• Everything looks good here.

Credits and personnel

• Do you think a section for this would be necessary?

Final comments

Everything looks good. I only have a few minor comments, and I will pass this. Hope you are having a wonderful new year so far! Aoba47 (talk) 12:07, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

Aoba47 – Thank you for the review as always. Missing the name of Tiziano Ferro was quite embarrassing haha. I have addressed all of your comments. Happy NY to you too. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 04:17, 5 January 2019 (UTC).

• Thank you for addressing everything, and it happens to the best of us lol. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 04:19, 5 January 2019 (UTC)