Talk:Secrets That I Never Want to Know/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:58, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• There is one deadlink
• "Desperate Housewives focuses on the lives of several residents..." Several?
• "...who tells him that he will only be forgiven if he turns himself in;..." Insert bolded
• "The episode is only one of two season premieres Cherry did not write himself, as he took on a reduced production role for the eighth season in order to develop a new series while Daily was given more creative authority.[14]" Insert bolded?
• The last two sentences in the ratings paragraph are a little confusing. Are you talking about Pan Am or Desperate Housewives?
• "The episode received mixed to positive critical reviews." -> "Secrets That I Never Want to Know" received mixed to positive critical reviews.
• "generally positive" or "mixed to positive" reviews?
• "...From the funny car theft scene to the ... housewives swim only scene, ..." I know this is a partial quote, but what does the bolded mean? Would it be more clear with the full quote?
• "TV Fanatic's Christina Tran gave the episode a positive review, giving it 4 out of 5 stars.[25] " giving -> handing out?
• "She also appreciated the writers' decision not to prolong Tom..." She -> Tran
• Almost flawless referencing. Only issue: Ref 6: add date (7/18/2008)

Great, great article. But then again, your articles are always well written and sourced. Only minor issues above, and then I'll be happy to pass this one. Ruby 2010/2013 06:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. All changes have been addressed, so pass for GA. Nice work! Ruby 2010/2013 05:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)