Talk:Sein und Zeit (The X-Files)/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 12:57, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Lead
- "The episode received mixed to positive reviews from critics." → "It received mixed to positive reviews from critics"
- "Several production issues plagued the episode, including the arrest of one crew member for possible kidnapped...", can this be rephrased; to me it reads grammatically incorrect.
- You could make reference in the lead about the title, as you have done under Production; "is a reference to Martin Heidegger's best known work and means "Being and Time" in German". A short sentence would be fine.
- Production
- "WE've had people come up to us and", WE in caps needs changing.
- Broadcast and reception
- "Kenneth Silber from Space.com, although complimenting the focus on Samantha Mulder", spot the spelling mistake.
No major issues with plot, sourcing and images. On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 12:57, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I believe I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:53, 29 May 2012 (UTC)