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the correct name of the Rocca is "Rocca Roveresca"
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- In the role of copy-editor, this is still WIP for me. I have improved the sentence structure and added question marks where I felt facts or references were needed. I have also (temporarily) removed the following section of "Visitor Attractions until I can copy-edit it properly. To do that, I first need to check the facts mentioned in the text. The section that I've removed is:
- *"In fondo al corso", the starting point of Corso 2 Giugno, on the same side of the bridge on Misa river and Portici Ercolani.
- *"In cima al corso", the ending point of Corso 2 Giugno, also known as Piazza Saffi.
- It must be said that nowadays it's still unknown the origin of this particular choice. Archeology has found no evidence about this issue, so far. Moreover, "In fondo al corso" and "In cima al corso" are not mentioned in any official document from the municipality of Senigallia. Nowadays this distinction is still handed down orally from generation to generation.
- I also added the description 'art nouveau pier' to clarify one of the attractions.
Mikemorrell49 (talk) 16:49, 24 November 2017 (UTC)
- I tidied up the couple of lines on the battle of whatever between Romans and Carthaginians in 607. I also took a look at Brittanica's equivalent entry on this page. It's better IHMO. I'll check whether Brittanica has restrictions on deep links and whether there is a WP policy on using them (or not).
Mikemorrell49 (talk) 18:49, 24 November 2017 (UTC)
- There are a few italian references to "Corso 2 Giugno" (2 June Course) which seems to be a annual "Walking" event. The information I've been able to find and translate (via Google) is insufficient to clarify the text I removed earlier. The "Corso 2 Giuno" is mentioned (and not further described or referenced) on the equivalent italian-language page, which looks, in general to be more complete. The best approach to improving this page would be to have an IT-EN tranlator compare the two versions and edit the EN page as necessary. The EN page need not be as complete as the IT but should be factually consistent. I have some doubts about this. I'll figure out which WP flags to use and include them.Mikemorrell49 (talk) 15:01, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
- I left a Rfc at the "Italy Project" talk page and a Google-translated message on the talk page of the Italian Senigallia page. I think I've done what I can until somebody else responds. I'm watching this page.Mikemorrell49 (talk) 16:49, 26 November 2017 (UTC)